Wonderful job! Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Love the way you repete the 2 lines in alternate at the end of each verse then bring them together at the end. awesome poem well done

Love
Jacs
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Good!

Great ideas and concept

keep it up!

Great poem and the rhyme scheme is clever too. Keep writing.

"Paper full of final goodbyes"

I LOVED that line. ^^^^^^^^^^

I didn't like this as well as the others, because the flow was off. but, I'm not a big fan of Villanelle's.

The poem itself though, minus the flow was amazing. When you take it line by line it has intense meaning and the word choice is great.

4/5