Wow i really like this peom! It is really good! Great Job!

I really like this. It has a lot of emotion in it. It makes you think about things like that. atleast it did for me anyway. good job 5/5

Great one... I loved the expressions you put in right there... and it's true.... 5/5

I like the emotion and storyline in this poem. The flow was good and I liked how you worded it. A sad story told that I wasn't really expecting from the title, but you did a good job.

Thank you for your comments on my poems. :]

Tammie

This is a great poem keep writing i know wat its like to be raped i was and ur sex really ha nothing to do with it.. Read mine if u have the chance and keep writing

Wow...very sad..but you did a very good job with the wording and structure of the poem...you also had a very good flow 5/5

If you ever get the chance, you should read my poem entitled, "Invaluable Object". You'll understand. I liked this.

-Rolo