Good poem xx

Nicely written
5/5
I wish my fam would turn to god instead of the bottle

It is really good

I think that the flow stayed with this poem precisely from start to finish. I really think that there is also plenty of opportunity for a stronger and better word choice, but that does not push me away from this poem. I liked reading it. I thought it was very short and simple but well done. Nice work.

Ok..I wont anymore comment about how you constructed it..As I have noticed, your poems were all written this way and I must admit somehow unique. It was short but each subsequent line has something to do with the previous that persuaded me to go on reading. Very neat and flawless written and I love how it rhymed somehow cute..Good Job..

From AA i learned u can only take it one step at a time. this poem is fiiled with sadness and also happiness cause u r taking it one step at a time. its a really good poem again. thanks for the read :)