Omg so dark so aweful so morbid 5/5 :(

Sad. but full of emotion.
5/5.

Wen=When

THis was pretty deep I must say, quite morbid and depressing. Although the thoughts are all mixed here sounds like a girl that has had alot of sadness thrown into her life. Seems as though she wasn't treated nicely in more ways then one. You not only wrote this poem for yourself but for others to read.. I'm sure people can relate to this. Well done. Keep writing. ~Mel

That was an amazing poem it had all the elements and overall it rocked!!5/5= )

Cory