Really great, awesome job.

your servant:
atticus

I think this is a well written song, with
good musical fluidity. A unique approach,
and wonderful write. Good job! Keep it up.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

This is really good. It seems like you are a great writer. Keep it up!!!! 5/5

I think this is great...very very well written!

This is beautiful, man! 5/5

Very deep and greatly written, you put it really good together like the lyric with very effective repetitive chorus. I like the meaning behind this piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-those wings you have grown
the top of the world your own
tell me what you can see
when your looking down at me-

Keep up :)
5/5 from me

I enjoyed your use of reflections in this piece, there are so many ways people are reflected or wish to be seen. The upbeat ending helped lift this piece.