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by Independence Forever
Really great, awesome job.
I think this is a well written song, with
good musical fluidity. A unique approach,
and wonderful write. Good job! Keep it up.
This is really good. It seems like you are a great writer. Keep it up!!!! 5/5
I think this is great...very very well written!
This is beautiful, man! 5/5
Very deep and greatly written, you put it really good together like the lyric with very effective repetitive chorus. I like the meaning behind this piece.
My favorite stanza is:
-those wings you have grown
the top of the world your own
tell me what you can see
when your looking down at me-
Keep up :)
5/5 from me
I enjoyed your use of reflections in this piece, there are so many ways people are reflected or wish to be seen. The upbeat ending helped lift this piece.