This peice was beautiful. The emotions you expressed were wonderful. I can truely relate to this peice as many other girls can too. Your words show your pain. Great job!
5/5

Amber....

Such a beautifully sad piece, I'm definitly going to keep an eye out on your work. You express emotions so deeply into your poems that it latches onto the heart and makes the reader feel what you are. This was definitly a great read worthy of a 5/5 in my eye. Keep on writing and i'll keep on reading. ~Mel

Aweh, I love this. The wording really allowed for the emotion to shine through and really pull the reader into what it was you were trying to get across. You made this so personal, but yet, since you didn`t use any direct names or places, it helps the reader put themselves there and relate to it; a VERY good thing to find in poetry. The only thing that I found was the ending should have had more of a kick to it, the whole poem was very strong, so the ending could have been a little bit stronger.

"The days slowly fade into night, empty and cold.
I tell myself it's not OK to cry, not over you.
I lecture myself the minute I wish you were here.
It's over and I can't take you back, not this time."

^^ LOVE this stanza, amazing.

5.5
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Very prety. I think it has a lot of emotions that you showed in this one very well. I hope you continue to write such beautiful pieces as this one

This is a fantastic sad piece. I like it even better than the other poem I read. Anyway, your word choice is great, and the emotions are conveyed very well. Enough said. It deserves 5/5.