Comments : MY mASK outsiDe

  • 16 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    I know how you feel! im the furthest from a girly girl. i cant stand them to be honest with you. great poem though!
    amanda

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow...that poem was really deep. great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Interesting piece...many can relate to it i'm sure. I can see where you are coming from. Thanks for your comment on my poem Cutting Your Life. I only have the suggestion of watching your syllable count a little more so it flows easier. Good job and keep writing!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by keep breathing

    Thats so good.. i no like EXCATLY, what u mean.

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    This part def got to me "None of you girls get it and none of you care
    All you care about is you looks, your nails and hair"
    Sounds like my ex.= )

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    AWESOME PIECE I LOVED IT READ THE LYRICS TO OUTSIDE BY STAIND I THINK
    U WILLUNDERSTAND WHY I WANT YOU TO
    READ IT ALSO READ MY POEM I WEAR A MASK CY