The way you made me
by Jessica Sep 23, 2007
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When we met you took my breath away i knew our love would last.. we talked all the time from day to night every moment with you just felt so rite but then she took you away and i had no say, i still remember that day.. i havent forgot you i never will how do i deal without you in my life..you were my everything my shinging star i hate her for taking you away.. |
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16 years ago
by Kyle
Awww this poem is sad and beautiful...i love it. great job..and im sorry if that happened to you
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16 years ago
Hey welcome to my club. I'm looking forward to hearing from you and your work so ill have a little look at your poems and let you know. I liked this but i think you should have split into stanzas to make easier to read :D xxx alex xxx
