So this poem was good but once again gramamtical errors... i did find a word in there that kinda had me thinking for a moment. haha it was "unreveal" i was thinking maybe unveil would be a better word... it means the same and is actually the more correct term. but yeah you just have to go through and pick out the words that are used wrong... but in time those things will come to you. you are a good writer for someone so young.

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