Wow, this piece is so powerful, amazingly effective and excellently written, filled with sadness. Whole poem is breathtaking, every line is flawless! You have an amazing talent.
The wording in whole piece is great, and the imagery is very vivid and superb. I can relate to some parts of the piece.
I can't tell which stanza is my favorite one, they're all excellent.
Well done!

Wow, now that is what i call poetry.
a very beautifully written piece.
the structure is wonderfully effective.
5/5
very well done.
Kat x

Gab, this is Amazing.

This peice was strong and effective, I simply don't know what to say.
It was wonderfully written, and I really enjoyed the read.

Awesome job hun,
--Elly.

Dis is real deep. the way you make the words fit and the way you keep the good flow going really was good. therefore im gonna give you 5/5

WOW!!! With this one I am totally impressed. Every word that you picked creates so amazing atmosphere. Superbly expressed emotions are mixed with vivid imagery. And you even made everything rhymes! I love everything about this piece and I can describe how much it impress me. Well done!

This is really good.... I relate to you a lot... please return the favor by commenting some of mine...

Thank you so much.. And keep up the good work!!!! :)

I like this one quite a bit ^^. It definitely sparks a few memories (back when I used to think love was only pain xD). I think you did a great job of writing your thoughts down. Kyri hopes your days bode well!

I loved this poem also. Just capitalizing the "I's" is the only thing I say this time. The emotion portrayed was honestly so deep it hit my heart and took me away to another world which you created beautifully sad. A touching piece which hits the heart like a knife. Well done. ~Mel