This is a wonderful poem. Once again it is full of a lot of emotion. It is amazing. 5/5

Kalee

This is a wonderful poem. Once again it is full of a lot of emotion. It is amazing. 5/5

Kalee

Good!

Nicely penned, but some lines were not that good maybe, but i think the entire piece flowed out right!

keep it up!

Sounds like you're describing a serious psychopath, still the darkness behind it is beautiful! 5/5

5/5 Great poem! I love how you can feel the emotion as you read it ...very well written and i love how you stand up to him!!!!!

Well, this sound like the conclusion to the first poem i read from you. Its yet another heartfelt piece, except this one is missing a bit of the intensity. Its a thoroughly good poem to read, but seems to lack an edge.

I've seen alot of other poems very similar to this and it doesn't really stand out from the crowd.

"I'm dealing with what you've to my innocence."

I think you're missing a word in that sentence.

Still a very good read and well deserving of the mark.
[5/5]
~Pete.

Again. i could feel it! That was a great poem full of emotion but all i have to say is to maybe even out the lines more...but thats it. great job!
*~NearlyCrazy6~*