Nice poem!! it was really good. and the flow started out good but than it kinda got mixed at the end:

But there was no answer just a cold bare dial tone,
I looked down at the ground and then threw my phone.

I knew what I had to do as I got into my car,
I knew I'd find you sitting alone at the bar,

keep up the good work!!

Awww such a sad ending..but accidents do happen. The flow was great and it definitely was full of emotion..you painted a sad story. Keep it up and great job.

Whoa a great sad poem kaila. nice to read a new one by you. well done. keep writing and i'm always here for you.

5/5 David

That was really sad! It was a great poem overall though. Awesome!

Awwz its sad but very well written good job!

First off, great poem ^^ I really injoy reading your work. One of the best I read all day in fact. Second thank you for the comment means allot ^^, I have allot of copy past errors and im sorry for that, just It...ya ><' ill get write on that, but all in all thank you.

5/5

OMG, this is such a sad poem. I really loved this poem. It was totally great, but sad. Great job! 5/5

*Cindy*