Go ahead

by dr phil   Sep 23, 2007


Go ahead and take my heart
but you have to finish what you start
you see me for who i am,
what others say,you dont give a dam

go ahead and take my emotions
and spin them into a commotion
you and me are on a ride
thats keeping both of us from suicide

since this is what you want
go ahead and take me
but do not taunt

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I loved this poem, although I do not agree with what you say about keeping eachother form suicide. It seems so...desperate. Like you both have nothing to live for. I think you should first try to be happy with yourself because then you would have more to offer to one another. don't you agree?

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid