Leviceour(free verse)

by Rain Lopez   Sep 23, 2007


It lives in ours
it is in our nature
it urges us
it is open
all be accepting it
and embrace it carefully

let this be the treasure of our life
only once, but forever it took over you

embrace it lightly
accept it too joyfully
do not turn back on it
or it should take it/itself
encourage it to take you
don't let them force it
its decision lies into two
love is free as air,
is warm as fire,
is flexible as water,
is confident/proud as a rock/earth

love takes over us
it binds and bounds to us
like a molded/soft clay
hardened and stature
but when it cracks
it cracks in pieces
wounded and hurt
but let your tears
fall through earth
mold it
make it
embrace it another time
but again
be sure to embrace it lightly
accept it surely

we all live
around it
it flows in ours in time
and it shows us
the real road in time

NOTE:someone asked if I can write a poem for him. At first i don't feel like it, working on a poem in other's thought/point of view. But i said, "SURE!". He wants it to have it like love/hate. Its hard to present an idea that i don't know. So i asked him if he have some ideas to expressed so he let me read it, at first reading it and making that poem is kinda hard. At first I've always thinking about my first point of view about the topic. I've always started at what i felt about what he feels. But i was wrong, i need to express what he feels in my words. So i came up with this. I'm not kinda sure if i took all of it out of his idea . Its fun working with others though.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    It's very good.

    I like it.