Should I ?

by Matt McKinley   Sep 24, 2007


Should I do it with this knife in my hand.

Stab her with all the force I can.

To feel the warmth of her blood and watch the light leave her eyes.

Stand over her to be the last she sees when she dies.

To Greive her lose with tear filled eyes.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kali

    Wow this one is intense to. I guess u really want to kill her or see her in pain!

  • 16 years ago

    by XlikkulMissStaciiX

    This Scared me Lol But i liked it..!! Im not sure if id ever want you to feel the way for me as u did for the reason.. in ur poem Lol! Great Poem!! =] S t a c ii e xx

  • 16 years ago

    by samantha

    Alright, i agree with the person above, but uh, the end line, well grammatically speakin it doesnt make sense, nice poem tho

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    WOW!!!

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