Comments : Picture the mind

  • 16 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Love iT.. It Was Soo Powerful And Great Emotion.. Defintly A 5/5 Coz after Reading The First stanza i Knew I Couldn't Give It anything Lower

  • 16 years ago

    by adrian

    Wow
    im at a lose of words which never happens to me
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I liked the last stanza;
    Disagree with the other member saying the first stanza stood out, because it didn't.

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    It's so beautiful

    liked it all

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I really like a lot this it is definatly deserving a 5/5

    keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    Its really different..gr8 piece

  • 16 years ago

    by b r i d g e t

    This is crazy
    its really good
    well written
    and has strong meaning
    you have talent

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Very good,like's it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Amazing poem!! drugs is something thats often put aside because it makes people feel uncomfortable when really they should be reading everything about drugs so that they can understand more!! great writing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Such a poem...it draws a picture of how these small things lead to serious toubles

    good job

  • 13 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That one was interesting