Comments : Secret

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very good dark poem, with greatly created atmosphere. You did good job with rhymes, too.
    I like the choice of words through the whole piece.
    My favorite lines are:

    -There's a secret held within,
    a story that begins, ends in sin.
    ghosts of the past, held in her dreams,
    no one hears the unyelled screams.-
    ^Truly effective

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    I like this poem. it all connects really well.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Hey Natz Babe,
    This is an amazing poem, sweetie.
    Take good care of yourself.
    I miss you so much, Natzzzzz babeeeee.
    5/5
    -Your Shortee Baby.

  • 16 years ago

    by Solus

    Sometimes its best for others not to know the things that haunt us....but is always a hard burden to bare. I can't say I fully understand (I'm not you) but I know what its like.