I love the rhyme scheme you used for this, and the whole thing has amazing imagery

"Sweet tender love I see your eyes
Collections of the stars that be
Enchanted by the moonlit sky
That sparkles like soft fireflies
And fills the night with fantasies."

that stanza is incredible, puts a vivid picture in your head, great work

andrew

I loved the use of old english in this, it just augments the piece so much more, I have to catch up Jeannie, it`s been awhile, but I always love reading your amazing work. Tim

This harkens back to an older style of poetry with the use of some of the archaic wording, which is refreshing to see, especially when it is done this well. This is truly an enchanting read. Interesting rhyme scheme, nice smooth flow, great images and a depth of emotion, this poem really has it all. Very impressive!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Jeannie,
Brilliant write and could have easily fallen into the love category.
^^^
Sweet tender love I see your eyes
Collections of the stars that be
Enchanted by the moonlit sky
That sparkles like soft fireflies
And fills the night with fantasies.

This was my favorite stanza though all were captivating. 5/5
Awesome Job

Excellent flow and good rhymes.
I love the way you used Old English.
Very good poem!
5/5