Simple and sweet poem with the mournful element well explained. Keep up the good work :)

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Fsams

I really like topic, it's won't I haven't seen and worte of it very well. Another job well done. 5/5

marcella

I never heard of the story .. like i've heard of pandora's box.. but nothing else. I understand now :) your rhyming was great and your flow.. amazing.

Great Job :)

5/5

i've enjoyed your work