Comments : America Crumbles

  • 16 years ago

    by Becky

    This poem is so true, unfortunately. The sad thing is most peopel don't realize it yet and are still livnig in yesterday. Great poem, amazing talent. Keep writing, 5/5

    Love, Becky

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    To what time are you comparing today with?

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Excellant job dave it could of ended better though. great poem