Comments : Silent Cries of the Purest Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow, this is amazing Charisma.
    I absolutely love it, perfection.
    Perfect flow, word choice, rhyme, everything.
    the poem itself was completely and utterly sad.
    Hands down, best poem I've read today.

    (:
    Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This poem is so sad and touching, but in the end it shows there was a lesson learned. No matter how bad a situation as long as you can salvage something from it- a lesson learned, a growth point, a different perspective, etc. then it is not a total loss. I always try to find the good even in the worst situations/traumas-though sometimes it is hard. The poem itself has an excellent flow and a perfect rhyme scheme and really conveys so much emotion and meaning. A great poem.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka