by Twobit
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I like how you describe love in this poem. The flow is fantastic! 5/5 |
by Miu
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I think It was beautiful. Deep and had a soft sound to it. Really amazed. I don't understand how it's rating is so down. Raw emotions just aaah beautiful! |
by Teria
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Well, once again I wasn't too fond of the rhyming. BUT, it was better than the last. |
by Blissful
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This was different and a really interesting read. I loved the ending, it was beautiful. Well done. *5/5* |
by Fan Angeleo
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You wrote about love in your poem, |
by Gem
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So cute!! |
by gack60
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Nice work!! raw words straight from the heart |
by Dark Secrets
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Wow this is really soo beautiful.... it explains love in such a simple yet powerful way. |
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Well Written!Worth the time!Made a fluster of emotions;exactly what a poet wants to do!5/5 |
by Sage
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Lovely! |
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Amazing! |
by Not
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This poem is awesome i love it .i love the meaning behind it, which i would like to point out my fave part which is"Love is more than romance |
by Alex
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Hmmm..... The wording was a little strange. Sometimes it didn't make sense, but other times was good! I liked it, but it could use some work. But I have no right to judge it really, it was what you wanted it to be, and that's enough! :) |