Oh, Tracy, this poem is truly beautifully written with so wonderful and vivid imagery, I felt like I was there, drowned in your memories... You really managed to describe all greatly. Whole atmosphere is superb from the beginning to the end.
Well done, 5/5 from me

Very cute. 5/5.

It makes me thought of my child hood after read this wonderful poem. Excellent 5/5

"..the trees that were there are all gone
nothing more left of the old barn..

..watching the tops of the weeds and grass
dancing in the wind as it blew.."

loved the images you created here and how you brought them into use in the poem..simply Superb
another Great Piece.
Do Keep em coming.

~Wake~

Nice poem, I too like to write about things that evryone can relate to and "remebering" is one of those things. Very nice treatment of something we can all relate to.

Just beautiful!
...Melody..=)

I love this one... It gives a soothing mood of remembering one's past... A classic one... 5/5

Great poem!
I especially like the choice of words at the end.

Keep up the great work! :)