I think ur friend was right. its really beautiful! pefect 5

I really liked this piece. To me it was beautiful. Your friend suggested something because they knew you would write a gorgeous poem and that you did. I loved the flow it was smoothe and I loved the meaning which you have written about. Really deep. This was a great read I enjoyed every line of it and didn't get bored what so ever. If I could be brutal I would be but I find nothing wrong with this poem except it's 4.5 rating. Deserves a 5/5 in my eyes. ~Mel

Very very nice, good job good job good job 5/5 wonderfull