Comments : Frost

  • 13 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I like the feel of sadness and the imagery in this piece. The dream setting and nature metaphors really give it life!

    Awesome ending verse:

    For nothing can hurt what is frozen,
    and frost does not weep, lest it dies,
    thus nothing can pain me whilst dreaming,
    for in my dreams I am ice.

    All the best, Debbie

  • 13 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    I think this is a really well written piece. The atmosphere it created was wonderful; and mesmerizing. (: A unique read, nicely penned.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 13 years ago

    by geeeeee

    The imagery in this poem was wonderful. The flow was good and the whole idea of the poem is really unique. I liked this stanza as well, the ending is unexpected and this isnt just the usual typical poem.

    For nothing can hurt what is frozen,
    and frost does not weep, lest it dies,
    thus nothing can pain me whilst dreaming,
    for in my dreams I am ice.

    Thumbs up from me.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    This whole piece was quite a unique read, I absolutely loved the imagery. The strength behind it was refreshing through the sadness. Very enjoyable read. I look forward to reading more.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lu

    Whoohooooo he comes back with a BANG ... with this amazing read.

    For nothing can hurt what is frozen,
    and frost does not weep, lest it dies,
    thus nothing can pain me whilst dreaming,
    for in my dreams I am ice.
    ^^^
    You always manage to make me think and though it hurts to think on this Saturday morning .... the pain is worth the read!

    Welcome back sweets ... hope to read more soon.
    Hugs
    Luanne

  • 13 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow is practically all i can say, haven't read a poem this good in quite some time!

  • 12 years ago

    by Marjan

    In my dreams, I am a dew drop. For me, ice sounds good, but is too hard to shape.

    All kinds of things may be drawing nigh all the time. But still, in our dreams, we are what we are. Hey, that's why we dream. Isn't it?

    I first thought this is about "Robert Frost". This indeed is a charming title for us, Frost lovers =]

    M.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    It was if i was watching a movie. you were very descriptive and your poem had this unique rythhm as i read great job as always
    Take care
    xHSx

  • 12 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very deviating and heartbreaking piece.. though a very enjoyable read...

    "The ocean did dance in terror,
    as lightning shattered the trees.
    Though wind drove the clouds into panic
    I felt not the slightest breeze."

    Really enjoyed this stanza, elegantly expressed for such a hunting poem.. Loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Brilliant...you have a talent, keep them coming

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow... you have such a great talent. Your poems are very nice & well written. Please keep writing 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is a thought provoking piece. Once again your flow stays consistant and you do not force the rhyme. Excellent job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is a thought provoking piece. Once again your flow stays consistant and you do not force the rhyme. Excellent job!