I love it...i can relate! :) i love how you put everything into sentences that were easy to understand, yet made you think!

That was deep and poetic and believe when I say I am at a loss for words. You're good I gotta hand it to ya. Its simple but deep. Get a load of that.

I loved this poem. it was wonderful. your a really good poet, 5/5

Beautiful write; truly excellent poetry. 5/5
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