Fix the mistakes. Click "edit poem".

Besides that. Good poem.

[Voted 5]

_Sam

This is interesting! It doesn't seem to much like a sad to me anyway. 5/5

To be honest i cannot relate to this in anyway

I liked the idea of using an Alias, split personality as you say, in this piece.

Was a bit crammed together. Some spacing would have helped read it better and have a more expressive flow to it.

I did enjoy it however and actually like a lot of your poetry,

keep up ALL the good work, hope ur life is a happy one at the most and CONGRATS on winning my very first comp!!!

Well Done!
^_^