I really loved this poem, Expeciall the meaning you portrayed behind this it was so truthful and understanding. The word choice for this was simple yet effective creating a nice flow throughout this piece. Such a sweetly written love poem. This definitly deserves a 5/5 from me. Well done. Keep on writing so I can keep on reading. ~Mel

Awww just something so cute, very very truthful, and loved the last sentence. Easy to read and understand, I really like that. Flow was great, very enjoyful!
So cute poem!
5/5

Amazing, just amazing. Everything about this poem was great. The flow was flawless, the word usage was great, the emotions were strong and powerful, and the meaning behind it was wonderful. :]]

"Desperate, seeking empty arms;
Anyone will do.
But beware of the trap;
For heartache awaits you."

^^
I love those lines. Fabulous job, deary. (: Overall: 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow a simple yet a very true poem.. u said all in just one piece what a great description.. it was completely flawless. and i'm pretty sure people could easily relate themselves on this and picture out a perfect scene.. keep up the great work!

"Desperate, seeking empty arms;
Anyone will do.
But beware of the trap;
For heartache awaits you."

those line were great i mean the whole poem was good but those lines blew me away becuase thats true. 5/5

Incredible!

"Desperate, seeking empty arms;
Anyone will do.
But beware of the trap;
For heartache awaits you."

Just incredible. Good choice of words. Now, I see that there are places in your poem that do not rhyme. I see a pattern there but... I still believe it's an excellent poem.

I give you all my points.

[Vote 5]

_Sam

With each day that passes,
You never see it coming.
Bam! It hits with an undeniable force.
A new love, much greater than the first.
^ This stanza totally throw me away, it doesn't fit in the rest of the poem and it isn't effective. It really leaves bad impression.
I don't like this one too much, just my opinion but I think that you could express your emotions with some more powerful metaphors.

Nice poem!!!!

Hmmm :) really got to me, keep it up ^^

Incredible, a true portrayal of a love most see as surreal

So filled with emotions and thoughts. I like this poem. If improved, would be great. Keep it up.

Amazinggg .... u got some talent here

We can go our whole lifes searhing for true love, remember that it can be looking you right in the eye, love this poem, kinda tricky flow but still is perfect, i give it a flawless 5/5!!!