nice poem i loved it! it was cute but shouldn't this poem be in the love poem catagory? but other that great poem!

yeah what they said

hey hun gr8 poem u r a very sweet guy luv ya luv heather

Awesome poem! I kinda like the shortness of it... it really says a lot in just a few words....but it would be good as a longer one as well....

I was thinking that maybe you accidentally put this line in "A hug and a kiss to cope" But then I realized what you were doing... (rhyming cope with throw, which is fine) You have such a nice, unique format here...and I think it just needs a little tweaking to be perfect... How about this for the first two sets:

A hug and a kiss
Is all i need
To enable me to cope
A hug and a kiss
Is all I need
To handle what life can throw

That will keep the format even....

It really is a great poem though!

Yes sometimes a hug and a kiss can make it feel all better and I really liked this poem becuase it is the truth...LiL One

Great poem! I love you're poetry. I hope to read more soon. Keep up the wonderful work.

Love,
Ashley