by Beautiful Chaos Sep 29, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Though to some the quest is impossible, |
I love this, absoultely felt drawn to this piece. When I read through it a second time, I noticed there were some grammar mistakes, I think it would flow a tad better if you ended some lines with a period instead of a comma, but I was so taken away with this poem that I didn`t even notice it the first time, nor does it matter giving the strength of this. Great job. |