My Own Bestfriend

by turtle   Sep 29, 2007


As the hands of time start moving,
The legs of life start walking.
Different sights, Different sounds
Unpleasant and lovely things all around.

As i started walking to that distant light,
As the story of my life i begin to write
i start meeting people both good and bad
some helping me up while others are just sad.

As i kept walking i earned some companions,
To my story they added more passion!
As the hands time moved more and more
Some stayed, while others i saw no more.

As i look back at the path i made
My eyes grew wide, i grew afraid.
All my companions had their "best"
I could see now, I was different from the rest

I close my eyes and continue walking
It's okay even if I'm lacking.
My friends are here, they are my "best"
To my heart, they are the closest.

All the while I just keep walking
Stifling my sadness, as i hear the pairs laughing.
I'll just keep walking till i reach the end
knowing that i, am my own best friend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    =^_^=

    Very deep. A lot of emotion.

    The flow of the poem was outstanding and I love it all.

    Good Job.

    [Vote 5]

    _Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    Sweet poem! your talented

  • 16 years ago

    by X l i l T a n i X

    I really like that poem it was very touching to me,, keep up the good work i hope to read some more soon :D

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This is simple and says some little truth in it.. i like it the way it is, the ambiance were so peaceful and smooth great job! i can't actually find some flaws in here but just kindda confused.. who is the "best" you keep on repeating? is it a best friend or best companion such as bf/gf? well anyway, keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    I've so been down that street, and you expressed it so vividly, eloquent and smooth, a true joy to read...thanks