Comments : Blue and white

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    I like this poem. I can relate, even if I am a guy. A heavy heart is a heart worth living for. To keep moving and to be happy with your life seems like a daunting task, but something that is possible for everyone. For years (and even now) I was caught up with this girl. She was...amazing, in everyway. But she is with someone else. I felt just like you isolated and helpless. One day I decided to stop feeling sorry for myself, and to find other people. I havn't looked back since, and I did find other girls. Keep moving, don't let someone stop you from living. You got so much to do still. Remeber to keep writing and I hope to read from you again!

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    "..Up high in the white
    Then following down into the blue
    ..
    Shes perfectly perfect
    And Im a perfect mistake.."

    its amazing how you've put urself through in these lines .. great work..

    ~Wake~