LiE. diE, bY, eyE... endingS makeS a prettY gooD sounD indeeD.... quitE nicelY writteN witH shorT bloominG wordS...

Omg this was so good, you dont relize till the person you love the most is gone, everything will be gloomy, wishing you could see that person and hoping that person feels the same way of you. Keep up this good work, im going to comment on another one of yours, thank you for commenting on my one poem, i didnt think it was so good but thank you!!! Maybe we can become poetry buddies or something x3

~`*^CourtneyxHolland^*`~

Wow hadia.. you really got nice rhyming

Aww i love it!! ah-dorable!! i love the ryming pattern and the wording you used.. :)