I really liked this poem it was really sad though. I like the rhyming. Well keep up the good work.

plz coment my poems
they were meant to be part 1 and part2
if u have time <3

Wow deep deep emotions 4/5 nice

Nicely done, Tabitha. Perhaps you could consider
My heart sinks INTO Deep Depression

This poem is filled with emotion...well done. please keep writing and I will keep reading 5/5

I loved it
keep on writing