He Reminds Me Of

by Dreaming With A Broken Heart   Sep 30, 2007


His touch reminds me of the gentle wind.
His hands remind me of rough bark.
His voice reminds me of sweet honey.
His kiss tingles my body like rain beating down.
His eyes remind me of sparkling stars.
His arms remind me of strong boulders.
His love reminds me of a happy couple.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow, this poem inspired me! Its short but it has so much potential and talent within it. You're an excellent writer! Keep up the good work. I gave it a 5/5. I'd also LOVE it if you'd read some of my poems and comment/rate them. Thanks!!
    Rachel

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Really nicely done Maura. You might want to consider some variations on "reminds me of" as in
    His touch is like gentle wind
    Though his hands are as rough as bark
    His voice is sweet honey...

    so that you have similes and metaphors

    Just a thought, but nicely done just the same.

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