Pretty good. love it

Ahh amazing, imagery is powerful in here, I really loved your wording also. A bit sad, and end just let the reader quessing if it was dream or not. Really enjoyed this!
5/5 Keep it up!

WOW!

Very well written mysterious dark poem

I was thinking about the last lines... it seems there is part two coz of that question? but anyway... it was amazing coz u had write it perfectly and the creativity is great!5/5