Comments : Sunny Rays

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Nice and sweet, great job

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautiful and loving and precious words....

    *This green meadow will bask in sunny rays*
    ^my favorite line of all....

    You two are a perfect match and I'm so very happy that you've found each other. Much love, happiness and peace to you both.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    I love this piece, it is filled with absolutely beautiful descriptions, and it sounds like you put your soul into it. So many touching emotions...
    Every stanza is greatly worded, written with so much feelings and thoughts behind, and that can really be felt while reading this piece.
    Keep writing!