Wow, I love this one, it's greatly written, short yet so powerful and emotional with beautiful description and message. Every line is great.
Excellently done!
5/5 from me

Well haven't we created a beautiful memory...like the message and like this form...well done Ang...

3/5.. good but not gr8

Beautiful memories, beautifully portrayed in words.
Well done
K xx

Aww that was cute - angela how have you been? i hvnt spoken to u in ages. i can c u hvnt lost ur touh, very well written poem. xx

Picked by mis treated people
they still carried a steeple
and the heart
i start

was for art

Wow, is is just so beautiful! Simply amazing with so many emotions... I am truly impressed!

I mean...this kind brought bad memories...I used to eat paste! HAHAHAHAHA

I love it...it's beautiful...what else can I say...you're amazing and you have some damn lucky chillens!!!!!

Oh I really don't know how to express the love I felt from this piece, so deep and beautiful, powerful and amazing. Theres nothing more beautiful then a mothers love to their child and you expressed that so much. I'm sure your a wonderful mother because I can feel how much love you have for them. This is amazing. ~Mel

I know how much your children mean to you, and this poem is so motherly and caring, and shows that time in your life where you accept they are adults and that they may now lead their own life, but they will forever be your babies to love and protect, no matter their age or location.

Lovely work.