This is a really good poem. The flow and wording was wonderful. 5/5

Kalee

You were very descriptive in such a short poem, i thought you did an amazing job at portraying the message, it was well thought of and i loved the wording, again the flow was flawless. great work. keep it up. 5/5

I loved the imagery you portrayed in this, it created very vivid pictures for me.
Flow was undisturbed throughout, and despite being relatively short you managed to pack so much emotion and depth into the piece...nicely done.

An amazingly penned piece this...
amazingly expressed ...very well..
my fav. lines'

"..My lips are aching,
Unspoken are we not?
Links forever lost,
Hearts you forgot."

greatly done.

~Wake~

Excellent!

This one is kinda dark piece, Honestly i don't really get the picture of this. haha! but it is still a great piece!

keep it up!

THe third stanza was my favorite. I thought overall it was a good poem. The flow and rhyming was nice and the title of the poem was unique and made me think about what that would look like. 4.

Wow... I love this poem from the beginning to the end. I can relate to it in so many ways. You wrote it excellently, expressing emotions in a great way. I can't pick my favorite stanza, every part of this superb piece is equally good. Whole piece is very deep and touching.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me