You do a good job of expressing your feelings in writing. I'm impressed a male wrote this.

Love the expression, great poem

I think it's a good poem, you have some lines that need a little waxing though :) well it's alright.. but the flow is a little off at some lines :) anyway.. I have one suggestion =D

I truly believe that I am (obsessed) with you.
= in love
^^ It's more sweet/romantic or whatever you call it.

Nonetheless it's a great poem, keep up the good work