It's been one year.

by 4eversum1   Oct 5, 2007


U chose me to be ur first kiss
u chose me to be ur first true love
the night u told me at homecoming '06
was all i ever thought of

i wanted you from the very start
u connected with my mind, body & soul
it killed me inside when we were apart
my heart beats for you out of control

i yearn to be with you, to feel your touch
feel the tenderness of your hand
u thought i didn't appriciate you much
but all my love for u could do is expand.

u were always there for me, always showed u care
u gave me everything, i gave u my heart
to throw away everything we had seems so unfair
ur love has died for me and all u cud do was depart.

its been a year; we've dealt with lots
but u walking out of my life i cud handle not
please stay with me, please be my friend
ill redeem the meaning of love & u'll know where we stand.

I love you!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Your word choice was simple yet effective, the flow was great, and the emiton heartfelt. The only thing I could see room for improvement is you shouldn't take so many shortcut u should be you it looks more professional, just a suggestion 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Being in love is like a special project of ur life that takes all of ur attention, all of ur heart, and brain, so it really need power to keep the love alive until the two lovers will meet forever.then u get the realise and joy of being in love.
    a very true and greatly written poem. you are talented...
    keep it up and a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

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