Wow thats so deep and touching ide melt if i was that girl. pefect 5. i really enjoyed it

Wow
i do like to know how that girl feels waiting for you, so you should write a poem about what happen next? does she open the door?
i think that will be a good topic to touch..
that girl is so lucky for whom goran's pen is moving day and night.
keep it up mr. Rahim

All i can advise you is
CALL BEFORE YOU GO so you wouldnt have to ask yourself that much questions,
hahahahahahaahaha
but a good poem like always.

Sometimes you can be so close to a person yet seem so far. I hope the girl with the hazel eyes opens the door everytime you go to her house ^_^lol. well dast xosh 5/5.

I like how you progress over miles during the poem, a unique touch

your servant:
atticus

Another good poem
keep writting

I’m normally not really into love poems but I do like this one. It’s so sweet!
I like how you express every mile with other words, I can see the whole image. Step for step. Very nice. 5/5

Beautiful poem!

Aww that is so adorable i loved it, i know the feeling too, i get it every time i'm on the way to ross'. :D. glad you have only the distance of 14 miles to cross now, beautiful poem as yours always are, i loved it.

What a beautiful, heart felt poem! Full of love and hope for the future. A very nice write by you!

5/5 Ingrid