Such a beautiful poem dear.It is truely heart felting.Keep up the good work.

God bless u

Damn.. such a heart breaking write... great work.. made me tear up..superbly said..the feelings flowed nicely..from one to another..

great piece.

~Wake~

5/5
You write exactly how i feel!
Its freaking me out lol x

Wow! 5/5 x

Whatever happened darling your mum of course loves you....nice poem, very sad one

I do love YOU, Though not your personality..'
How many times has my mum said that to me!
Good poem !

I'm sure this would make your mother proud. Its a very emotional poem. It also flows well. I enjoyed.

I kno exactly what ur goin thru...be strong hun...dun let those negative thoughts entertain ur mind...she loves u..trust me...

Great poem, Full of feeling and emotion. 5/5

Wow.

1. this poem's flow is so very good that it almost falls off the page
2. the feeling put into this poem is so powerful i felt it from HERE
3. the way you beg for your mothers love in this wonderful piece of art makes me wonder how she cant love you or at least say it and show it

5/5