aww im sorry babe.. u'll find the right girl give it time.. that was such a cute poem use it ull have all the chicks~ keep up the work!!! Bye babe
Sending all my love**
Erin**

wow this is amazing! i dont exactly kno how it feels to be trapped in a nightmare that will never go away, but i hav been to something similar to that. ne hoo, great job, and keep up the good work!

a superb poem, a 5 all the way around. it flowed very very well. good work. look for my next poem called THE ANSWER. and read my others. thx

A Amazing Poem. You really have some talent. I gave it a 5

Hey that really was an excellent poem. Keep them coming, they are all very good! Take care xxx

SORRY I KNOW IT HURTS IT WILL GET BETTER TIME WILL HEAL IT IT WAS A GOOD POEM I LIKED IT VERY MUCH KEEP ON WRITING LOVE MUCH
HOLLY

Hi, It's Emilya writing, I really liked your poem.. You have tallent =)

I gave you a 5

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Excellent piece of poetry. You have evidently put your emotions into this wonderful piece. I am sorry you had to go through this pain, however, I wish you all the best. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. I very much appreciate your comment. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to reading more. Take care always
Kristina

that was nice, really wrote it from your heart, I know how that feels too, I wish I could help but I myself know whatever other ppl tell you to let go and ya will find a new girl, until you think for yourself and make up your own mind in the right time, until then it doesnt matter

ya I went thru all this pain (and still am goin thru) with 8 words too... what a coincidence, eh? but they were different 8 words

keep up the great work

GREAT POEM AND REALLY SAD