Good!

This is one didn't caught my attention well, but i can see much image and a hidden message on it.

"Reminiscing;
Far from missing"

i think this line is the best of all of lines, simple words yet so descriptive in a very way.

Keep it up!

"Past creeps up and haunts her present,
Blocking out, only brings more pain.
Why did she lie? To their heart, their face.
Things shall never be the same."

Wow, breathetaking! that one hit me the most. luv it!

"Past creeps up and haunts her present,
Blocking out, only brings more pain.
Why did she lie? To their heart, their face.
Things shall never be the same."
the highlight of the entire poem these words are deep and powerful, as far as the rest of the poem the emotion is strong, the flow is flawless and the word chpice is good 5/5

In my opinion some ryhmes are pushed.....^_^ 4/5 that only my opinion..

I liked this poem but I think the earlier one was a bit better. I liked the stanza and the mood but the dead man one brought you more into the character good job Though. Plot121