Giving In

by Josh   Oct 7, 2007


I lay it down all on the line, stating the feelings I have for you are intimate and divine.

I take a chance by telling you how I feel, making sure what I have said you know is the truth you know it is real.

I tell you this steping out taking a huge risk, telling you I love you and then having to listen to you say I'm the last on your list.

I am sick of this trying to get close to the one I have feelings for and, have them cut off any hope just slamming shut the door.

Am I being too nice do I share to much care? I can't change myself I don't even dare.

I'm tired of getting all these shallow girls; You were the one for me the one that truly brightened up my world.

You led me on so far I thought we shared affection, apparently not it was a hidden detection.

It breaks my heart when you talk about another, when you talk about him; I cant take this anymore I'm giving up I'm giving in.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...you left me speechless you did an amazzing job hunn like you put so much meaning behind it and the flow was amazzing im sorry you had to go through that youll find the one who appreciates you...and loves every little thing you do and say just got to wait... anyway really cute poem 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Aurora

    This is really good, I loved it :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Madi

    This is wonderful. Its sad too, because I feel the same way.