Monster you've become

by Alissa   Oct 8, 2007


Like a creature of the night,
you have transformed into evil
and lost all power of good.
You are a monster, forever trapped.

You put this upon yourself,
first for a legit reason.
But you fell, didn't you?
into that hidden hole.

Swarming full of evil and hate,
where God can't even help.
You blinded your eyes from the path,
from the shining light of love.

What happened to you,
exactly what monster have you become?
your fury has driven you emotionless
yes you feel no pain,
yet no joy either.

You live like stone,
yet pain surrounds you.
Did you forget why you're alive?
Where is your soul? It's finally masked.

Completely hidden,
by the monster you've become.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a good poem
    well done alissa
    im glad to of read it
    and you for your comment

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "you have transformed into evil
    and lost all power of good."
    ^^ The and makes the syllables match a bit better, but I still think you should take it out. It would sound better, even though the syllables would be a good 3 or so apart.

    Other than that one thing I like this poem. I believe a lot, and I mean a lot of people can relate to this, being a person they know, or themselves becoming the monster.

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