Decadence
by sibyllene Oct 9, 2007
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Syllables tumbled murmured |
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13 years ago
Three years ago I asked "why decadence"
perhaps the title was confessional....
tantalizing speculation cannot solve the question but, this is still quite effectively incredible..
love,
gramma -
13 years ago
Three years ago I asked "why decadence"
perhaps the title was confessional....
tantalizing speculation cannot solve the question but, this is still quite effectively incredible..
love,
gramma -
15 years ago
by Nicko
Beautiful rhythmical poem girl, steady my beating heart, Delicious you have caught the moment and taken me to sweet sweet remembrance!
As always fantastic work!
Nicko -
16 years ago
Wow...
I love this from the beginning to the end, it is excellently written and very emotional. Unique piece with fantastic descriptions and original, unusual rhythm. This is one of the best love poems I've read in a while.
Greatly done!
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16 years ago
Excellent poem and well written , I liked the way you expressed yourself in this one . Gave me a sence of pleasure , great job . especially these lines :::::insistent waves, steady tide throb
scent of hair, your neck, your warm
delectable slow hungry pulse,
don't stop, don't
hum-tumbled words soft
let me pull you into
rich dark weak, sweet
oblivion
Good work , keep it up , your friend Tracy d ~~~5/5~~~
