Excellent!

For this one. The concept is really interesting, It tells such realism about the world. I love your wording as well, and the ideas you'd written. Great write!

Keep it up!

I love this! The imagery you use is so powerful and emotive, i was totally drawn in by this. Brilliant work
DnB

Candi, your poem is very beautifula nd it has a very important message or the content is worthwhile. I found some typos and little bloomers. You could correct the (My dream was shattered..., Still/sill)

I gave you 5/5 for the beautiful and mournful content

Tc
Fsams