Very well written..... i enjoy reading all of your work! Wonderful Job! 5/5

This was a fantasic piece, I would say amazing, but after reading alot of your work, amazed simply will not do it justice. I loved the feelings that came to the surface while reading this. Keep up the great work, no doubt you will. Timothy r

Really a great poem it took my breathe away and it painted a picture in my mind and i felt like i could see every detail it was great.5/5.

Aww this one is so sweet:)
I love your poems!!!5/5 always..Melody.=)

Wow, Tracy, this is so beautiful... You can always touch my heart with your poetry.
Greatly written love poem, from the beginning to the end. I like the atmosphere that you created and your descriptions are so good!
Keep up :)
5/5 from me

Grr8888 wrkk..i love this poem.. the way u describe evrything goin on along wid ur feelings.. n the ending wz just awesome..